Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Original Song : [link]
Composed by: ナカノは4番

Translation From : [link]
by aquatius

Characters :
:iconsayabosansnivy: - :iconjonkagor:
:iconharusnivy: - :iconikazuchizangoose:
:iconkusanokamisnivy: - :icondeathwolfblood:

--

I'm bad at making fights =w=;;

I made this from the morning to the evening
well, actually, from 12 Am to 10 PM
well, that was fast

The lyrics doesn't really fit with the PV, I know, I wanted to try something different..

Also, don't ask why the pitch is so high

so, what do you think?

( some ideas from : [link] )

... wait, I thought it was SaKuYa...
Add a Comment:
 
:icondragontrulovermaniak:
DragonTruLoverManiak Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...........what?

the beginning sound like: "another bits the dust." befor the words came in.

*replays. waches flash. not words.*
bravo. but i like more movement on snivys parts. but than again, it seems it will not improve it. hmm.
Reply
:iconkingingly:
kingingly Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
What do you use to animate?
Reply
:iconfrosslassfan1:
frosslassfan1 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
They use Pro macromedia 8
If u want do download it,here's the link:[link]

Note:it's the trial
Reply
:iconkingingly:
kingingly Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
Reply
:iconfrosslassfan1:
frosslassfan1 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
Reply
:iconseiishin:
Seiishin Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student General Artist
poor haru.
Reply
:iconprivate-ikazuchi:
Private-Ikazuchi Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
One year and I'm still watching this D:<
Reply
:iconsnivylover123:
snivylover123 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
I can't beleve it D;
Reply
:iconsnivylover123:
snivylover123 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Snivy is one of my favorite starters
Reply
:iconsnivylover123:
snivylover123 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
This is not fuuny XD
Reply
:iconsnivylover123:
snivylover123 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
?I don't get it....-_-.
Reply
:iconreshiramguy15:
Reshiramguy15 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
coool
Reply
:iconreshiramguy15:
Reshiramguy15 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
R U online!!!
Reply
:iconmilkshake674957:
Milkshake674957 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student General Artist
this is really cool~
um i have a question, or two ^^;? im kind of new to making animations and i was wondering~ how do you get a character to smoothly slide in the screen or out of? is like it a change of speed of the animation cause i dont know how to change the speed ^^; and how do you get the background to stay black without leaving a thin white edging? :iconnyorononionplz: too much?...
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011   Digital Artist
on the bottom of the flash, there's this "fps : --"
change that

now, idk what you mean ._.
Reply
:iconmilkshake674957:
Milkshake674957 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student General Artist
oh okay, um regard that last thing about the background than ^^;
um one more thing if you dont mind, but how do you add audio?...
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011   Digital Artist
file > import > import to stage/library > (pick the file)
Reply
:iconmilkshake674957:
Milkshake674957 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you so much, i really appreciate it! ^^
Reply
:iconsemi-charmed137:
Semi-Charmed137 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well. The song was good, that's for sure, and the fact that the snivies slid across the screen to the beat at the beginning also got me into the animation at first.
But.
There's just one thing that bothered me a bit.
There was no real sense of movement in the animation itself. I mean, it's animation, but the characters didn't seem very ... animated to me. It seemed like, more or less, flashing colors and things sliding across the screen.

Not to be rude, it was great, nonetheless, but fighting scenes and motion are something to work on, try watching many different fight scenes, see how other animators animate fighting and motion. I'm trying my hand at animation again (with CS4, no less. I need flash professional 8...), and i'll admit, it's hard, but it takes practice. Another thing I'd like to point out is that Kusano had his eyes closed while they were fighting (Danmaku, Touhou, nice touch.).. That's not normal. It's not even normal in anime.
Living beings in general will have their eyes open when in danger/fighting something (that is, if they have eyes), it kind of made the fighting seem.. "fake".

Anyway, as I said before, it was good, but there are somethings you should practice if you're really thinking of taking up animation.

A quiet watcher, :iconsemi-charmed137:
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011   Digital Artist
ah, ok, I'll try to make something like that someday,
I'm just a beginner. ^^;

Also, thanks
Reply
:iconsemi-charmed137:
Semi-Charmed137 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay, take your time, it all takes practice. :D

Your welcome~
Reply
:iconwolfmaster248:
wolfmaster248 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Writer
Wow...That's all I can say. >w< BEst flash I've ever seen
Reply
:iconprivate-ikazuchi:
Private-Ikazuchi Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Digital Artist
.^." ................................................................................................................................................................. sorry kinda speechless at the moment but...



amazing..
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011   Digital Artist
XD

thankies, Ikazu c:
Reply
:iconprivate-ikazuchi:
Private-Ikazuchi Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
np X3
Reply
:iconmumu5000:
mumu5000 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student General Artist
cute
Reply
:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Digital Artist
hm...nice fight and animation....just gotta work on attacking animations,like posture,character poses or use other moves that a snivy may have.Who knows,if it were metal claw,i'd suggest,that like:the snivy who's using metal claw on both hands and slashing and about in alotta directions like Neji(c)Naruto(c)Viz Media 's 8 Trigrams Palm Rotaition.Think of it like that and You could have double team and lotsa snivy's using metal claw in all directions.You could try it.My suggestion and comment.
Reply
:iconr-mk:
R-MK Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome plan,but don't you think that's a bit hard for Jon?
Reply
:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
IT'S JUST A SUGGESTION,sheesh...but,I don't want Jon to take it THAT fast,he can just take his time,isn't that how ALL Artists and animators should do their thing and work?
Reply
:iconr-mk:
R-MK Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno,maybe
But it's best if you do it to the end,no slacking!
Reply
:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Well,that's true because if you slack off on a certain flash or creation or project,you might lose what you were thinking of
Reply
:iconr-mk:
R-MK Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well,it's hard fights if they have short arms and legs...
Reply
:iconnightbluemoon:
NightBlueMoon Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
I like dis song ; w ;

Izh techno-ish ; u ;


WHERE'S DA REPLAY BUTTON?!?!.____.


AND ALSO WHARE IS DA BURRITO?!:iconburritoplz:
Reply
:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Digital Artist
JEEZ!There is NO replay button.Some flashes don't have it.so they reapper as PLAY buttons.
Reply
:iconnightbluemoon:
NightBlueMoon Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
I know but he should have added it c:
Reply
:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Digital Artist
yep.X3 I guess either,he didn't have enough time to put it on there or it took up TOO much space in the picture.
Reply
:iconnightbluemoon:
NightBlueMoon Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Yeah :/
Reply
:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
IK
Reply
:iconr-mk:
R-MK Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You don't even know how replay? -.-"
Reply
:iconnightbluemoon:
NightBlueMoon Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Yes eue

I just wanted to click it instead of doing the way I do it :I

DON'T JUDGE ME D<
Reply
:iconr-mk:
R-MK Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
xDDDDD
Reply
:icondeathwolfblood:
DeathWolfBlood Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
For some reason when Saya said "I can't sleep" and "I want to scream" I almost died a little on the inside from Kawaii
Reply
:iconyakalentos:
Yakalentos Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student General Artist
Nice animation, I liked it. c:
The Japanese hurt my ears at a certain point, though. xD
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011   Digital Artist
you commented because there is kusano XD

Thank you XD

High pitch? .w.;
Reply
:iconyakalentos:
Yakalentos Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
Lol how did you find out. |D Obvious.

Yes, kinda. xD
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011   Digital Artist
You always commented if there is kusano in it =w=;;

I see... and maybe it's also because of the music quality ._.
Reply
:iconyakalentos:
Yakalentos Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm sorry if I make it look like I only watch things with Kusano in it. Cus it's not true. xD"
Reply
:iconjonkagor:
JonKaGor Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011   Digital Artist
I know, but, oh, okay =w=;;
You're such a Kusano Fan X"D
Reply
:icontheominousdude:
TheOminousDude Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
This is really good Jon!
I want a request, but I might as well save up some points for one.
Anyways, this is awesome. :D
Reply
:iconaeronator:
Aeronator Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool. ^^
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×
Download SWF download, 1.9 MB




Details

Submitted on
December 4, 2011
Image Size
1.9 MB
Resolution
550×400
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
3,343
Favourites
92 (who?)
Comments
57
Downloads
26
×